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Theo's avatar

So the clock stuck nine but 9 doesn't have any significance? Read the part about 6 being biblical number for man and obviously the rest spells death but 9 still eludes me.

Possible interpretations are that 9 becomes the letter I so it relates the word death to you, the planets used to be 9 too so maybe a celestial/fate connotation

Apparently in biblical numerology it would be associated with finality but idk I don't like numerology much

Paro's avatar

I love how you try to find meaning in every single thing, but no 9 is just my favorite number and it execudes the colour black.

Banger interpretations legit such interesting perspectives.

I don't like it much but I do find it interesting

Theo's avatar

I used to do maths like people do cocaine of course I try to find meaning in everything ¯⁠\⁠_⁠(⁠ツ⁠)⁠_⁠/⁠¯

kind of an underwhelming answer to this one I can't lie maybe you should try some more sophisticated encryption in the next one

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Understandable

This one wasn't something I wanted anyone to decode.

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You've somehow gotten even more downcast (don't even have a word for it) since I was off like how do you even do it

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Life tu merey sath bhi hoi hai par ye haal nahi hoa

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How can one wrote so gruesomely beautiful 😭😭🖤🖤.

And this part sold me :

"I rip the layers off of me, all this flesh reeks of misery.

I lit candles inside my wound, hoping they'd pray for me.

I shall heal, I shall heal-God, the ghastly, grieving shrine I peel"

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Coming from SANA herself, lysmm ❤️

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We are pro players of "NO YOU 🎀" 😭😂

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Pros at not accepting compliments

alif | الف's avatar

PARO!!!!!

this is so haunting yet beautiful. the grotesque imagery is so vivid here and so are the metaphors you've used. the latin references and the repetition of "Numquam iterum senties." just took it to the next level, it is so genius - not to mention the numbers you used too (totally didn't read the comments) - this is such a well-thought out piece but also so poetic and haunting, i loved this!

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OMGGGG I love it when someone actually notices all the detailssss!!

Tysm for such kind wordss 🖤

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This was haunting yet beautiful. I loved the way you use the numbers and the skeletons helped to enhance the mood. I loved your short sentences because it added to the mood. Thanks for sharing.

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Thanks! Means alott

Ameliorating A's avatar

And did you create those art pieces? They are hauntingly just too amazing 😳😳🤌🏻🤌🏻✨✨

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Aww no but I can if you want me to chanda

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🙈💖💖🫠🫠

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Damnn!! This was greattt 🥹🥹🥹

Very very well written bhai 🫂✨💖💖

Each and every line hits 🥹🥹

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Gigglingggg 😚💜

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"Ghosts nestle between my teeth, haunting the child I buried beneath." beautiful beautiful

WHAT A BANGER COMEBACK YAYAYAYAYAY 😩✨

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LOVE YOU LIZAYY 💙

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"Numbness creeps through me like a vine, the human in me long left behind."

Hauntingly beautiful

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🖤🌙

shayan's avatar

what are the numbers? i don't like solving puzzles while reading

Paro's avatar

Simply death

Aliza's avatar

Ohh!! I see 👀

4-D, 5-E, 1-A, 20-T, 8-H, 6-F

What f or 6 means here?

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yesss

It is biblical number for man

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'i offer my pulse as incense to the abyss'